berdetail gile wings dia *o*

tapi kena perbaiki sikit la sbb nampak serabut. the hair seem to blend with the wings too, so try tonjolkan sikit kepala by giving thicker lines. :3

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Those wings are really impressively detailed though the coat is quite simple. Anyway it looks very good

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^^ Thanx for the comment!
Hmm...btul gak... aku mcm xnk guna line tebal ah bila part rambut... sbb tkt nmpk kaku... tp xtau gak ah... Xp

Lama x dgr cite? kemana?

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Thanx for it! ^^

Hmm... i think i still got problems when it comes to clothing details. ^^

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tu la. aku tgh final exam ni. dekat nak abis dah. T_T

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I wish u all the best! ^^ Aku tengah cuti 3 bulan ni!

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argh jelesnye!
but thanks anyway~

cuti nak wat pe?

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You're doing a fairly nice job of recognizing the shadows and the way the different objects would affect them. IE you're recognizing the shadow created by his arm and making note of it in the wings.

This gets a little lost however in the wings, as in, you aren't recognizing where the wings fold over and recording that in shadows.

Wings are hard. His right wing is better than his left one as far as shading and value are concerned. It looks as though you payed attention to the fact that the feathers closer to the body in question would likely be smaller. But you did not do this in his right wing.

Sweeping my eyes from left to right, there is little, to no differentiation between the hair and the wings, even the eyes.

Which may have been intentional, cause of course, white wings balance with white hair.
But hair and wings have a very, very different texture. Wings, due to layering, have potential for very dark values, and hair has potential for a much wider range of values.

Your darkest dark is in the fabric of his coat. Fabric doesn't get THAT dark THAT fast. Maybe it would, but you look at the wings, and it suggests a much lighter darkest dark than the cloth would.

Work some of that graphite into the coat. And get a micron pen to run over some of the feathers or hair.

No prob! ^^ oh ya! jangan lupa beli gempak 202 n 203! Dua2 ada kuar lukisan aku!

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Tah ah... cuti aku just lukis2 utk prepare 4 cf kut? Time cuti skolah aku pegi ah jalan2 ckit pegi kl ke apa...

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